A Miserable Love Life

by snuggles   May 17, 2006


I stare into the eyes of Lucifer...where am I?
When I look into his soul, all I see is HIM.
Can I hear them whispering? Or am I a paranoid freak show?
I dance in my room alone with the music on to Bob Marley; reggae of course.

We shall meet again

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    LOL. I am so sorry for that comment. I made it a lonnnggg time ago when I knew very little about poetryy. Now, reading this poem again I can see how wrong my assumptionss were. This poem was unique and well worded, the flow was good and the metaphors throughout worked well. The only line i did not like was "Can I hear them whispering? Or am I a paranoid freak show?" Maybe get rid of "show" and just make it "Or am I a paranoid freak?" Nice poemm. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Heyy :) your doing good, i just think you need a little more practice.. hehe! so.. keep practicing! o, n btw, i love your name! itz so cute!
    jessy xox

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