by Poetically Speaking May 17, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
I am, |
by Kaylee
Your poem had so much depth to it that it didn't feel like reading words but watching the scene being played out with vivid imagery. It wasn't the ususal love poem, and I loved that. The format was different but wonderful. Allowing breaks if the reader needs but keeping their attention all the same. |
by Natalie
This was cool! Loved the last line. Really cute. ^_^ Keep it up! 5/5 |