I loved you this much Part 2

by eric   May 17, 2006


Read the first one! (if you haven't :P)

What have you done!
sure it started out as a bet
but my love, you won
and for you i'll never forget...

i even told my friends
they were laughing at me too
and now your life ends
but i still love you!

i fell for you
and i fell hard
i heard about the things you'd do
and im sorry for every scar!

you werent the only one to bleed
i just want you to come back
please darling hear my pleed
my lifes fallen off its track

i know i told you i hated you
and didnt want to see you anymore
its because i was afraid
but now i dont know what for!

everyday i go to that bridge to pray
praying i could see you again...
thinking of things you used to say
and wishing your life didnt end

the box you left on my doorstep
i read everything you wrote
for 3 weeks i havent slept
i keep reading your suicide notes...

each day i grow sicker and sicker
wishing things turned out a diffrent way
crying over one of your pictures
my worlds turn black with a shade of grey

now that your gone
my lifes come to a hault
i never want to move on
and its all my fault

your my only one
i took from my dads drawer
his only gun
to end my life forever more

my conceince and mind
better off dead
its about time
with a bullet through my head

this is our romeo and juilet story
filled with hate and love
forever i'll always be sorry
but together we'll always be thought of...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Stephie

    Fanx 4 commenting on all my stuff!

  • 18 years ago

    by Stephie

    Well i totally want to write what i did for part one but that would be gay.... im sorry but i cant think of a way to describe this... its fantatastic. it made me tingle.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Wow....that was amazing....you have sucha talent eric....it's like you can draw people into the story and make them cry for you becuase it touched them so, and without having experience to write such an emotional poem, you really have a gift....I'm so proud of you, and that might sound strange, but I am and I hope to continue reading your incredible poetry because when I read your stuff it makes me feel so......real......Oh well, I better go, I'll talk to you on AIM sumtime.....see ya later handsome.....bye
    ***** 5 STARS!

  • 18 years ago

    by Lynn Anderson

    Wow Eric, thats a pretty intense poem, even compared to the first one. Very meaningful, very painful. Almost like a dream. I give you a 5!

  • 18 years ago

    by Yazdan

    This one is awesome. It flows a lot better than your first one although your 3rd paragraph seems awquard. Other than that its awesome.

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