I really lke this poem. It has a great flow to it.
You might want to capitalize some of the "i"'s though. It may just be a personal preference, but it looks a lot better. I find that poems that have no capitalization look sloppy, but maybe thats just me =)
Great Poem!
Sarah-Joy

Oh I meant to say another thing, that I can relate to this as well. I think I know what your going through or what you mean : )

Keep up the work and have a nice day!