This was really good. I loved it. Keep it up 5/5

`taleee xx

Wonderful poem. I love your stanza and the meaning of it. I also hate when you have to rely on pictures to remember things that your mind just won't let you, or even let go of things you want to forget. Great job!

(P.S. I added you to my favorites to, I love your writing! :D)

Great Job on this one! I really like it. You have a great form and structure and a good meaning behind this piece. Keep it up and I give you a 5/5

Wow i love this it's amazing your flow was great your really good and i cant wait to see how you grow as a writter keep it up. dont ever stop. 5.5