Frederick the Great

by Darien   May 17, 2006


Frederick the Great

Born a crown Prince of Prussia,
before Germany even existed.
My father I hated with a passion,
so in the army I enlisted.

My father died and I became King,
Everything he did I had to change.
Our empire was small and empty,
and the laws he had were strange.

Our army was small yet bulky,
we only had a few true pioneers.
Artillery was slow and ineffective,
we lacked the number of engineers.

I reformed our army to it's best,
there was no country we did fear.
We had the best army in Europe,
Attacking us, no one would dare.

Slowly our empire would grow,
I gave my people more land.
An enlightened despot I became,
it was something rather grand.

Prussia gained military glory,
the finest Europe had ever seen.
It was large, fast and powerful,
So amazing, she was my Queen.

All other countries respected us,
a future Germany I did create.
I can be found in history books,
for I am, Frederick the Great.

* I love history, so I wanted to write about one of my favourite 'Greats'. He was also my favourite military leader *

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  • 18 years ago

    by ShadowDancer

    A history lesson in poetry. very cleverly written. a good solid rhyming stlye, and exellent flow. you included many aspects in your poem, (for example the lack of engineers) very cunningly

    Ruby

  • 18 years ago

    by AnnMarie

    I thought I read this one before but I guess I did not because it took my vote. Great poem I don't think many would write a poem about''fredrick the great'' you know only because it is history as alway this one was awesome! Please read a few more of mine!

  • 18 years ago

    by Daenerys Stormborn

    This poem is awesome, i love history too!

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    That was a really different poem but very creative and interesting. I love your idea and how you portrayed history in another view. Keep up the great potential.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    LOL! omg, this is too funny! we were just learning about this in cultural studies! wow.. small world huh? :P great poem, mixed poetry with history in a surprisingly good poem! it flowed well, and i loved how you put yourself in the place of the person you were describing! nice write! 5/5