I liked it! It was a different type of poem for me to view. Good job in writing this one! 5/5 Keep up the good work!

I didnt like the topic but i bet most people would, i just dont realy like that type of peom, but words and easy to read 3/5

LOL! omg, this is too funny! we were just learning about this in cultural studies! wow.. small world huh? :P great poem, mixed poetry with history in a surprisingly good poem! it flowed well, and i loved how you put yourself in the place of the person you were describing! nice write! 5/5

That was a really different poem but very creative and interesting. I love your idea and how you portrayed history in another view. Keep up the great potential.

This poem is awesome, i love history too!

I thought I read this one before but I guess I did not because it took my vote. Great poem I don't think many would write a poem about''fredrick the great'' you know only because it is history as alway this one was awesome! Please read a few more of mine!

A history lesson in poetry. very cleverly written. a good solid rhyming stlye, and exellent flow. you included many aspects in your poem, (for example the lack of engineers) very cunningly

Ruby