The eneergy here is good...its long but i rly enjoyed it keep it up and please please please comment on some more of my poems..thnxs.

Lissa

Thnx lissa!!
i'll check out your poems
don't worry!

Wow. I don't even know what to say about this poem, it's very powerful. It's long, but I didnt even mind reading it. Great poem, keep them coming, please.

PS- Thanks for commenting on my poems.

-Paul.