Wow, this poem was really great. I loved how it was universal so I could apply it to many things, and so could others, making it easy to relate to and therefore having a stronger impact on the reader, in this case me. I really loved this poem hun, Beautiful work!

-Tainted

Great job! relatable concept and written very well.

take care - hannah

That was a deep poem but greatly expressed. I found it to be short but interesting. Keep up the great work :)

Wow.. that was great.. it was so deep! keep up the wonderful work! 5/5
jessy xox

You could get different meanings of this and to me it felt like being claustiphobic or not being to escape a guilty mind. It was rpetitive but maybe that was to give it a closed in feeling.

Liked this poem a lot...especially this stanza;

Scraping at walls
Scouring at floors
Searching in vein
For windows or doors,

so descriptive..really good way to start this off.

oh just to let you know you have a little typo lol..gray...I think you meant grey....overall a great poem indeed.

Just want to say thanks for your advice on my poems especially "Take me to your heaven, changed a few things although im having trouble with the end lol...any ideas?

Take care, Lis

Another rather low poem. But it's extremely well written. The word flow is rather good. A great poem.x

I love it! I love the rhythm of it and some amazing imagery made. Great job XD

This poem is great, it made me feel the desperation of being trapped, especially with the last stanza.

Great job! 5/5

Keep writing.

I liked the way you could like... i dont know how to explain it. You could relate to this poem with different circumstances... like.. many people can relate to this in many different ways... like i interpreted it as if you feel stuck inside yourself in this poem... i really love your work and im definately adding you to my favorites 5/5 -jen-

Hunting for escape
Pushing at the wall
Hitting the ground
Trying not to fall,

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^^^ Loved it. This was really good. Though it was short, You expressed so much in it. I don't want to sound to repetive, So I agree with what the others have said. This was a fantastic piece. Keep it up! 5/5 [Though I would rate higher cause I loved it, But I can't]

`taleee xx