Come With Me (lyrics)

by Serenical Darkness   May 17, 2006


As each minute passes, you find it more difficult to breathe.
Holding on to every breath, inhaling only when you need.
Taking a ride along the untamed abyss, hoping to find your freedom and happiness.

Come with me...

Take my hand and come with me,
Through the tunnel of reality,
Everything here is the same you see, Here you can choose your destiny.

Who on earth is to decide, what is wrong or what is right.
The choice is yours, this is your night.
Keep your head up, don't give up.
Cause in a minute, you will wake up.

Come with me...

Take my hand and come with me,
Through the tunnel of reality,
Everything here is the same you see, Here you can choose your destiny...

As each minute passes, you find it easier to think.
No longer holding your breath, you have all the oxygen you need.
The ride is over, the unknown fade away.
You found your freedom and happiness is a dream.

Come with me...

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  • 18 years ago

    by amber

    I love your work, it reminds me of my sister, I try everyday to inspire her to a better life, she is in jail now for quite a while and I have her daughter living with me. this one brought tears to my eyes.

  • 18 years ago

    by BrokenMisery

    Interesting ideas again, you like to put a unique spin on things. I like the idea but i'm unsure about the chorus, and "tunnel" sounds kind of dingy and not pleasent which is where the rest of the song is heading. The phrase "come with me" i really like and i think it would be interesting in a relationship song as in 'hold my hand, everything will be alright', sort of idea. Best of luck with the band and i'll look out for you when you're famous ;)

  • 18 years ago

    by Aussie

    Awesome poem! the rythme flows well. i like it:)

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley Ann

    Great Poem...I love how you wrote it...try fixing the structure a little..it will look better too...check out all my poems and rate! :D tell me what to fix plz! ~ME

  • 18 years ago

    by *colorsofmylife*

    This is amazing! makes me think a lot...also gives inspiration, I am still developing in my writing and this makes me want to grow with it even more! keep writing, you have a lot of talent! and as for criticism, I don't think you need any, it's awesome as it is!

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