I like this poem so much! IO wonder why it doesn't hv any rates or comments!
just I think you shud split it up into lines and stanzas so it'd be much easier to read(you know readers are usually impressed with the way you organize ur poetry)
another comment :: this poem has nothing to do with about-life poems!!
its a sad or dark poem =)
but its so lovely I loved it so.!!
keep it up
NemO xxxxxxxxx

Yet another good one. 5/5 ; - }