Comments : You walked away

  • "Tell me this isn't how it has to be
    But there is nothing more you see
    And as I look at you, you turn away
    When I asked you please baby stay"

    Great stanza!! I loved it!! You have a special way with words!!! I couldnt find anything wrong!!! Keep it u 5/5!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Lauren

    Hey dear I love it! See ya later

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    Hey darl beautifully written a heartfelt piece. keep em c0ming! =]

    l0ve fr0m
    d0ra

  • 18 years ago

    by BeautifulCutter

    This was cute, i really liked it!

  • 18 years ago

    by Sourav

    Another nice poem... I love the way you write!