by firexflys May 17, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
SLIP AWAY |
by Joyo
I liked it. I really did. |
by aaron 1 remo
Hey that was great the only bit of constructive critisism is perhaps if you changed the rhyming scheme from aabbccddeeff to ababcdcdeeff maybe it would have more depth. But I don't know it was pretty good anyway |
by dora
Very t0uching g0od j0b 0n this 0ne t0o! |