This had a lot of depth and meaning behind it. Alot of kids are pushed to do what their parents want them to do... and it gets a little sad. You brought this into the light and showed this problem in a elegant, but sorrowful way. This was great and the stanzas went together perfectly. Keep writing!

This poem is soo deep! I loved it! I hope you get through this...Good luck!
Lovely!
xoxo