This is very complex even though at first glance it seems simple. While I don't understand all of this I liked the honesty you write with, didn't really enjoy the rhyming scheme however your rhymes are not overused and sound different to many I've read, which I liked. Nice poem.

I didn't understand quite a few of those words (im a pretty simple person lol) but the general meanings are pretty clear. And personally i quite liked the rhymes. yet another 5/5 lol.