Comments : Brutal Murder

  • 18 years ago

    by David johnson

    Hey man i am new on here but this poem was crazy could make a murder poem about u cold bloddedley killing someone plz

  • 17 years ago

    by Xx Chrissi xX

    Heya. nice poem. I likes the structure, the short lines kinda make it feel like it's over quickly, which links in with the death. good one. 5/5...again!