Feeling_alone

by Aussie   May 17, 2006


Her i am
floating on water
surrounded by the dead

i'm the only one who have senses
able to see it all
only one knows what's going on

feeling alone
no one to talk to
not even the ability
save all their blood

sitting here wishing
to be gone
to be dead

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  • 18 years ago

    by PoetryKnight

    I gave you a 5/5 for the whay you have it written. I mean, It kind of reminds me of the movie sixth sense. good movie any way. I like it when some one writes about death and all. For it is a real thing, like love. Fantisy is a good topic, but real life is what drags a reader in. That is what your poem has done. Great job, keep up the good work. Your Friend- Aaron

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