I gave you a 5/5 for the whay you have it written. I mean, It kind of reminds me of the movie sixth sense. good movie any way. I like it when some one writes about death and all. For it is a real thing, like love. Fantisy is a good topic, but real life is what drags a reader in. That is what your poem has done. Great job, keep up the good work. Your Friend- Aaron