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by Jennifer May 18, 2006 category : Sadness, depression / grieving, loss
Standing there Looking back at me Is my life And what it used to be Filled with love So perfect and sweet Was my wonderful life Nothing had it beat But it all came crashing down When you said goodbye Turning my smile to a frown And bringing tears to my eyes My lip in a tremble My eyes blood shot red This was the part of my relationship The part that i would always dread To lose you Brought great saddness and despair And brought me also to realize Just how much you didn't care My begs and pleads Meant nothing to you And i soon found out There was nothing i could do I lost you in my battle Between my depression so great And losing you brought me down To the point of a break And now i sit With a knife in hand No one can fix this No one understands A new start may be in line A tearful goodbye I'll just follow the sign Until the day i die
by Sourav
It's so very emotional. Very nicely written.
by ari
It's a good poem, but "brang" is not a word. "brought" is. It's a really good poem, though. I love it!