Now this is a friendship poem! It painted a really calm picture so vivid and clear that I wonder what gave you inspiration to write this. Nothing felt forced and seemed right out of a story book or even a photo album when you got to the part about turning pages carefully. You really are a gifted writer, trust me if you read some of my comments it's rare if I call someone that. I've read some of your poems and each one is just wonderful but this one has to be one of your best. A true delight to read.

The use of imagery was exquisite, delicate and beautiful, this poem almost has a dream-like quality to it. Everything seemed so natural and unforced. I can't say I found the poem especially relatable, but having said that it certainly put me in mind of someone looking back...so the love of for one's childhood? Great write, a pleasure to read 5/5 x

Wow that was really good...the way you wrote it really gave me a distinctive picture in my head!! Great job!! Hope my poems post a picture in your head as well as yours did to meee!!

I enjoyed reading your poem. I feel as if I've been to that place, felt the wind on my face. It's a love of nature, of the earth, of the simple things in life.

Wow..i'm speechles...that was amazing..very descriptive..nicely written as well..

5/5 keep up the good work

This is an amazing poem, I think it expresses love to everything. It's very original and beautifully written. Great job. 5/5

Wow, that painted some pretty vivd pivtures in my mind. It made me think of a childs love, for nothing in particular, just the love that innocence breeds. Great job on the poem, please continue writing!

Ravyn

I loved this poem, the images were so light and calm, it seemed to portray a love of nature and family but then this line
" As I turned the dusty pages carefully"
Makes me believe this shows a love of books, or the person is reading an old diary and is remembering the love of their childhood.
Many interpretations to this wonderful poem and that makes it exciting!

I lovet his poem it has a quaint old fashined feeling. you wrote in a pertly detached way and it gave it great effect, vauge and full of myestery, a beautiful poem i absolutely loved the last few lines!
xxALLYxx

Aw, this was such a beautiful poem noni, I liked the way you left it up to the reader to decide what it was about, you are a very talented writter!

--Steph