by Emma May 18, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
We are going |
by linderrrxo
I like this poem it is very good 5/5 keep up the good work love linda |
by Kim
I liked how this was a shorter poem, it conveyed more emotion, like the narator was just so distressed long sentences didn't come easily, I don't know if that makes sense but I thought it added to the overall effect of the poem ^_^ |
by Summer
It's shorter that alot of poems I read, But thats mostly what Ive been writing lately too. I love this poem, it's got alot of emotion, but you can't really tell who towards like a family member, friend, or certain someone |
by Darien
Really nice poem, it flowed well and there were some good rhymes. Good ending too. |
by Natalie
I really liked this. I can kinda relate. I don't know if this was about a friend or boyfriend. But in my eyes it was about a friend. Anywho..Back to the poem. It was really well done. Though the stanza's were short, You got your message across, And I could feel the emotions. Great poem! 5/5 |