by Twisted Heart May 18, 2006
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
Into the distance, I humbly stare |
by Rachel RTVW
Nicely penned form with beautiful imagery. Great job! |
by Midnight Sun
Comment #5: |
Thats cool how you wrote it 5/5 |
by BrokenMisery
Beautiful language, you're writing is very well crafted! No critisim, I can't find anything wrong with it. Great description, very vivid and alive. An excellent piece, keep it up! |
by shobhana kumar
Wow! amazing! beautiful, vivid imagery. I especially like the first stanza where you have personified the sun. |