5/5 because i really liked this poem i thought u did a great job with it showing all ur emotions nd feelings in it =] ok 1.

Your poems are just so amazing and so full of passion and emotions. I loved reading them. Many of them sound like my stories.

This stanza relates to me alot.

I ask...Why is this in my heart?
The pain of my love, so heavy to bear.
As tears burn and rend my soul apart,
For I fear of a love we cannot share.

Outstanding job on your poems.