Lying Under The Stars

Awww, beautiful, keep it up 5/5

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this is like... really great.. im not really a fan of love poems and but you blew me away with this. You can actually feel the love when you read it, its really great. 5/5...-jen-

For one thing this poem was short but sweet. The title showed a really romantic moment. It really does leave a wonderful feeling when someone might read it over again or has time to let it sink in. Here are a few suggestions if you don't mind, though, again it's up to you wether to take them or not.
"Waiting for the perfect moment" It's really a sweet way to describe something like what you're trying to say but it gets shadowed a bit by the ending in which you have, "Thinking what a perfect night" Maybe you might want to change one of the perfect's to another word?
"Almost as if it was drew"
This line was the only one that really bothered me a bit because when I read it the first word I thought of was, "Drawn." It probably does make sense how you have it, that was just the first thing I thought of.
All in all though a really sweet poem.

That was so sweet!! Great job Italian Stallion!!!