Deep and sad poem. The flow and rhyme are awesome! A very enjoyable poem, though sad and haunting.

Such a mellow scene written. I read it slow, and calm, and it gave it such a great effect. The words you used, and the imagery you created. Fantastic stuff!

How sad, but i love it keep writing ~silent eyes~

Really sad poem when it started as a romance one to ending with someone waking up after dreaming of someone they miss. Just a suggestion, you use both words fade and fading. I really think if you maybe changed one of them it might add more of an effect. But that's just me and just throwing out a suggestion.

Dear Luanne, another beautiful sad poem though sad but beautiful ended.....

Absolutely heartbreaking! I like how you don't delve into who this person is, it adds an element of mystery, which makes for an extraordinary poem.
Take care and keep it up~Holly

Thsi seems liek the kidna poem that should rhyme, and the fact thatn it didn't kinda took away from it.

Very deep, i can really feel the sadness and pain as i read.
Great Writting:)

OMG Really Good i like it a lot i will be addin you to my favorites add me if you like my stuff! Keep up the good Work pimpin'

This poem touched me, and it was very good. I like it. check out some of my poems if you have time

I gave this poem a 5/5... it touched me, and i understand how you feel... very good poem!

This is very good

-christina-

NICE POEM. really liked it!

I like it so do you have any more like that hope so there good... lvz it stephanie

Omg i love this poem! chek out sum of my stuff sumtime

~N ! 1< 0~

So touching..there's much more pain behind this...Good writing...take care...

Beautiful!

Excellent poem!

5.5

Awwww! that is sooo sad and sweet! oh, wow, i adored that! very very good! you are quickly becoming a favourite of mine! you really are an excellent poet! 10/5