by Weeping Wolf May 18, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
A Dance with Death (El Tango de la Muerte) |
by Katt
Nice poem lala, this guy sounds a bit abusive though.I can see some of the relations of this poem to real life. I like how you twisted it to make it sound threatening and "the deadly dance of desire" is a propelling line. |
Oh yeah... i wondered if ud like to enter this? it's on heartbreak and i entered my old poem "Heartbreak"... it felt so good to read it again. |
That was painful... thanks 4 sharing, lay... i miss u :) if u havent read tattoo yet, pls do. it's very mysterious/love themed. :) in a way it's dark, too... but the pictures run thru the mind. |
Wow that was brilliant....great flow and style....it pulls you in from the start and doesn't let go....great...5/5 |