My favorite stanza was the forth one, closely followed by the third. although, it my novice opinion, this wasn't your best work, i feel it was still a good piece of writing.

Brad

Dammit dammit dammit. ahhhh. brilliant poem emma. conditions apply. love u.
-Suzie

Woww.. that was brilliant! it was very good! keep up the excellent work! 5/5
jessy xox

Wow...sad...gr8...excellent!!! 5/5..no more needed 2 b said

How sad ;_;

P.S. thanks :)