Nice poem... really nice.. i like it!!! Na-touch me there...

-Jemimah Grace-

A really nice tribute to your friend Jade. You guys are really lucky to have such a strong friendship. A really nice poem, and I'm sure she enjoyed it.

A very nice poem for a friend but like most friendship poems I have read here it seems to barely, "Scratch the surface." of what it could have been. For one thing this line didn't make sense as read:
"the one whose is in my heart," How about. "the one whose in my heart."
Also maybe you should go into mroe detail such as:
"She always makes me feel whole,
I never feel like I am alone,"
Well she may make you feel that way but how does she? If you added a bit more detail and maybe ask yourself the type of questions us readers are asking when we read, you could give your poem so much more depth to the words. As is, it is nice though.

Aww.. very sweet! you are lucky to have such a good friendship with your friend, dont take it for granted! :) keep up the excellent work!
jessy xox

Good peice, well written with some well expresed aspects. maybe you could go into slightly more detail in places but as it currently stands it is a very good peice, well written with a good structure and well protrayed content.

NICE poem. really like it. got alot of meaning to it !

God bless your friendhsip

Hey do you remember me? o MY gosh! It is amazing to finally read some of your work again. You have improved so much. You will take over the world with your way with words.

Wow that was sweet. and i just loved it