Wait for me

by Genna   May 18, 2006


I know that your out there...
you have to be...
i hope that your out there,
thinking of me

I\'ve always wondered
whether you really care
Ive always wondered
are you really there?

one day we shall meet
and then we shall know
that we are made for each other
from head to toe

we\'ll pass in the street
on a warm summers day
our eyes will connect
an invisible ray

and from that day forth
together we shall be
but till that day comes,
please wait, for me.

please comment, this is my first time writing poetry and i need heaps of advice!!! thanks, xx

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  • 18 years ago

    by tiffany

    I think this was cute and innocent, and just the way a poem like this should have been written. You did an excellence job and the poem somehow touched me. We are all waiting for that special someone and deep down inside all of us we want that person to wait for us. I loved the poem, and I hope you write plenty more. All the advice you need is to follow your heart and write what its telling you too! Good luck in the future.

    p.s check some of my poems out if you want.

    xox Tiffany

  • 18 years ago

    by silvervein

    You have a excentric way of expressing your emotions.
    i liked the poem, and all is well said.
    but i do hope you find the right one for you.. only time will tell.

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