How do you do it?

by kida   May 18, 2006


Why does your heart cry?
why does your soul die?
every single time
you look into his eyes?

he broke your heart
and left you crying
tore you apart
and watched you dying

you saw him with her ever day
friends tried to help
but you pushed them away
how could they understand when you couldn't yourself

he still says he loves you late at night
and the next day hes kissing her again
it would be easier to get in a fight
then struggle through the pain

why dose your heart cry?
why dose your soul die?
every single time
you look into his eyes?

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  • 18 years ago

    by Julia

    I love this poem oh so much.

    its like you read my diary or something. omg. i completely connect with this.
    anyway this poem has really great rhytm, and i like how you repeated the top phrase

    thanks for the comment by the way!

    you really can put your feelings into words-most people can't do that.

  • 18 years ago

    by XDyingx-In-xVeinX

    Heyy thanx for commenting my poem, i think you are a great writer and i really liked your poems. this one especially. i could relate to it.... 5/5

  • Hey i really like this poem a lot, its written well and i can relate to it also. Keep up the great work and thanxs for the comment of my poem

    xoxo Sarah

  • 18 years ago

    by Ms Joanna Dark

    Thanx for commenting on my poem. i read some of your poems but this is one of my favorites. this reminds me so much of the guy i was writing about. it's amazing. great job. keep writing.