Pain

by silvervein   May 18, 2006


Life's moments - loosing time
seconds going by never to return
rain falling on your face
i saw you standing there
wind blowing trying to take away your pain

thunderstorm in the dark
lightning emphazing you
still standing there -
in the shadows, not
scared - lightning light up the
pain inflicted on your face.
sadness looking down on you
like a fallen angel

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  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Wow, so simple/short and so deep, just loved it

    wind blowing trying to take away your pain

    do let me where in the world such wind blows...:o))

    beautiful poem dear

    all the best and take care
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Nee

    Wow so meaningful despite being really short!!!!
    its so lovely written!
    well done dear =)
    Keep it up
    NemO xxxxxxxxx

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