Comments : Pain

  • 18 years ago

    by Nee

    Wow so meaningful despite being really short!!!!
    its so lovely written!
    well done dear =)
    Keep it up
    NemO xxxxxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Wow, so simple/short and so deep, just loved it

    wind blowing trying to take away your pain

    do let me where in the world such wind blows...:o))

    beautiful poem dear

    all the best and take care
    5/5