Cycle of Actions

by Torn   May 18, 2006


Thumping upon my ear drums,
Light weights of steel crashing down.
The harsh reality of who I am,
The reason I carry this frown.

Slicing away at my heart,
Like the razors of a razor blade.
Cutting away at my innocence,
And at the shameful mistake I made.

Smothering the light in me,
My one true self, my soul.
Like covering a burning fire,
Letting nothing escape the hole.

Posing thoughts into my head,
Like an actor having to pretend.
While slowly realising,
She's gone way past the end.

Questioning her every belief,
Like a cynic who refuses to see.
Doubting her every move and trust,
Forgetting the person she could be.

Tare her world apart,
As the cycle starts again.
She is losing warmth within her heart,
She's sick of having to pretend.

*kinda prompted by a fight with my parents, then it just kind of came out...
-sorry ive been away..so sorry to Fish Bowl-

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  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Tare her world apart,
    As the cycle starts again.
    She is losing warmth within her heart,
    She's sick of having to pretend.
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    I loved those lines. And wow. This poem was filled with so much raw emotion. I loved it. I can relate a little aswell. Really great poem. Keep it up. && Thanks for adding me on myspace and msn =D Tehe. 5/5

    `Taleee xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Timothy B

    Good seeing ya again. Hope all is fine.
    Good writing again.

  • 18 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    Hey sweety I have missed your amazing poems, but this was worth waiting for....I am so sorry to hear what you are going through, but I guess we all need those ups and downs to get stronger...Just remember that you are not alone, I am here, by your side, knowing what you are going through!!! I hope things get better for you soon hunni...

    Much Love Sabrina

  • 18 years ago

    by PURE HEART

    How perfectly u penn down ur emotions....lovely job and i hope u r ok dear.....5/5

    luv

  • 18 years ago

    by Cody

    You always know just how to express emotion in the perfect manner, when ever I read something you've written I just feel it

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