Comments : Cycle of Actions

  • 18 years ago

    by Nee

    Awww huni I'm so sorry!
    hope everything is Okay with you
    the poem is definitely amazing even thou its a heart breaking!!!
    I miss you, I know you're busy! I feel like shit too and Probably you won't see me again till the 2nd of July since my final exams are so near! wish me luck and I already am,wishing you too =)
    Best Of Luck
    Luv
    NemO x0x0x0x0x

  • 18 years ago

    by Mona

    Wow.. I'm here to type a comment and yet I just don't know what to say..

    It's so beautifull sweety. It just hurts me to read all these feelings and emotions.

    You've wrote it all down so beautifully, as you always do.

    Just keep writing, but I'm sure you will =)

    Love you and I've missed you

    Lotsaaaaaa love
    -xxx-

  • I luv it babe... i hope ur ok, ily so much baby alwayz, i want 2 c u soo bad nd giv u da biggest hug ever!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Cody

    You always know just how to express emotion in the perfect manner, when ever I read something you've written I just feel it

  • 18 years ago

    by PURE HEART

    How perfectly u penn down ur emotions....lovely job and i hope u r ok dear.....5/5

    luv

  • 18 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    Hey sweety I have missed your amazing poems, but this was worth waiting for....I am so sorry to hear what you are going through, but I guess we all need those ups and downs to get stronger...Just remember that you are not alone, I am here, by your side, knowing what you are going through!!! I hope things get better for you soon hunni...

    Much Love Sabrina

  • 18 years ago

    by Timothy B

    Good seeing ya again. Hope all is fine.
    Good writing again.

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Tare her world apart,
    As the cycle starts again.
    She is losing warmth within her heart,
    She's sick of having to pretend.
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    I loved those lines. And wow. This poem was filled with so much raw emotion. I loved it. I can relate a little aswell. Really great poem. Keep it up. && Thanks for adding me on myspace and msn =D Tehe. 5/5

    `Taleee xx