Depression

by Uzair   May 18, 2006


Depression is hurtful
Depression is painful
Depression seems to make the time slow down
Depression tends to stop time
Depression can be violent
Depression can be silent
Depression comes in sizes
Depression can be big
Depression can be small
Depression can last for a long time
Depression can last for a short time
Depression is torture
Torture to humans
Depression is the devil
The devil entering your blood
A sign the devil is in you, yourself
Depression is an emotion
Depression is a mood
Depression can have blood
Depression can have dread
Depression can have tears
Depression can have power
Power to control the world
Power to do absolutely nothing
Power that is useless
Power that is useful
Depression leads to problems
Problem for everyone
Depression is for the guilty one
Not the Innocent
Depression is a small word
A small word with a big affect
A small word with a powerful definition
A small word with that can turn your life around
Depression can be quiet
Depression can be loud
Depression is unavoidable
Depression comes and goes
Comes quickly
But leaves after a long time
Depression is hated
Hated by everyone
Then why have depression?
That’s the question!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Bloomed Rose

    Good poem. I agree with Brisa also though. way too much repitition.
    but 4/5! nice job

  • 18 years ago

    by Brisa

    I think you shouldn't have used all the repetitions. They became too much. every line was one. xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    The repitition is good, though gets a little much in the middle it still serves it's function of enforcing the poems point. i like the idea of finishing upon a question but think the one you used could be improved, i know why you used this particula one and it does work but lacks the power of the remaindeder of the peice.

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