The repitition is good, though gets a little much in the middle it still serves it's function of enforcing the poems point. i like the idea of finishing upon a question but think the one you used could be improved, i know why you used this particula one and it does work but lacks the power of the remaindeder of the peice.

I think you shouldn't have used all the repetitions. They became too much. every line was one. xoxo

Good poem. I agree with Brisa also though. way too much repitition.
but 4/5! nice job