You know how much of an inspiration you are to me and I get that more than ever in this poem. The way you can take some words and string them togethor and they mean entirely different words. Brilliance!

Sondos

Wow.. that was amazingly good! that took my breath away.. keep up the wonderful work!
jessy xox

Wow, wonderful Poem. I enjoyed it quiet abit. It was a little diffrent but it was so great. Good Job.

Wow nice, it was unique and very different ... great job on this one 5/5

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

You are an inspiration to people here, at least some of us, who actually want to learn the writing craft. This poem was beautiful in the metaphor's you used. You can describe something without bluntly telling it to us.

I love how you say one thing and totally mean something completely different. Great job 5/5

Wow that is really good. You have such a way with words.. I would have never been able to think of something like that and the title was very creative, the definitely wasn't what I thought it was going to be. Great job on this!

Yeah, this is quite metaphorical. It's a good thing I'm good at that stuff. I wouldn't be able to explain myself without them. This was really good, and I can definitely understand what's going on. Very good use of words and the metaphors were great. Keep it up :)

Okay, differnt than im used to, but still once again, im completely speechless... i have no words to speak... u are amazing as i told you before... i really love your work..

**meggie**

Unique and interesting. i like the metaphors used, excellent writing and talent is shown.

5.5

It was kind of confusing but then i got the hang of it keep writing and please try to make it more clear so readers can understand it better.
trusty*

As always your poetry is very mature and it deals with sensitive issues. Your use of diction and imagery is fanastic. The structure was completely original and the development was unique, like nothing I have read before elsewhere.

You never cease to impress me with your amzing poetry. You are truly talented. Bravo!