Dawn

by Finalgravedigger   May 18, 2006


Are yoiu the dawn of my new horizon that wil show me the rgiht wway, the one who will always be there for me when in need, the one who will always be there for me when in need the one who will listen to my thoughts or will you cast a shadow over me and shatter me.Blind me, show me pain, agony and put me in a hopeless vortex. Love goes either way , it can be the sanctuary of Hope, or a pit of terror.But either way we all need this to live good or bad.

I dont know how i did on this one please comment and vote

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    I like it, it's very intriguing 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Cameron

    Hey i like your poems they are really good. When you get the time will you comment on mine please thank you.

  • 18 years ago

    by Milton

    I liked. love is lots of things, but still real special too. Good stuff. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Xox P.a.U.L.i.n.A xoX

    Hey wutsup??? Im beautifuldisaster, i just changed my name, This is really good so yeah, wutsup??? I havent been on for a while, Do u still remember me LoL
    5/5 Good job

  • 18 years ago

    by Sh**tingst*r

    I'm just joking. I don't care about spelling. hhaha. Really, it is a very very good poem. 5/5