This is a great piece but you made a few little spelling mistakes dont worrie about it we all do it.

keep up the good work.

gemma xoxoxoxo

I think its gorgeous. and thanks for the comment on my poem ^-^

It's really beautiful. Not counting the spelling mistakes but it was the best poem other than the " I love Cheese " poem I crack up on that one!!!

I'm just joking. I don't care about spelling. hhaha. Really, it is a very very good poem. 5/5

Hey wutsup??? Im beautifuldisaster, i just changed my name, This is really good so yeah, wutsup??? I havent been on for a while, Do u still remember me LoL
5/5 Good job

I liked. love is lots of things, but still real special too. Good stuff. :)

Hey i like your poems they are really good. When you get the time will you comment on mine please thank you.

I like it, it's very intriguing 5/5