Here she lies (Epitaph)

by ღ»Lσιѕ«ღ   May 18, 2006


Here she lies not making a sound,
soon to be quietly resting under ground.
A wonderful mother and amazing wife,
now has went to heaven for eternal life.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Connie

    Beautiful!

  • 18 years ago

    by Chasie

    Wow that was so short but it had alot of meaning and thought good job loved it

  • 18 years ago

    by blueknight

    Short sad and great that it is and oh powerful great one

    geneross

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Awwwww.. this was so sadd! i've done one of these too.. this was beautiful and full of love.. the emotion was clear and brought a tear to my eyes..

    now has went to heaven for eternal life.
    ^ i think it would be better if you replaced "went" with "gone"

    wonderful job! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by nobody truly knows me

    Wow...even though this is so short...it says SO much...i loved it...5/5.

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