The Truth?

by Kaylee   May 18, 2006


It struck thunder beneath waves,
Splashed disgrace upon my brow.
Echoed native tongues unspoken,
Yet mirrored kinder reflections.

It claimed sinners out of lovers,
Disorted text without a blink.
Copied teeth bitten remarks,
Left behind stale tasting air.

It lassoed stars out of night,
Upon myself it placed blame.
It slit my dignity to pieces.
Alas you still call it the truth.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Timothy r

    Quite an exquisite piece if I may say, welcome to my favorite`s list . Timothy r

  • 18 years ago

    by Poetically Speaking

    Once again, your words roll so smoothy of thy lips. I love it. I can honestly relate. My relationship echos so much of what you speak. Gosh. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Marlena

    This one was great too. you have really good poems they are so beautiful.

    Much love,

    Marlena

  • 18 years ago

    by Sondos

    Bloody Hell! This was brilliant. It should be in a book. So true, so metaphorical, descriptive, symbolic with beautifully vivid images

    Great Work

    All the Best
    Sondos

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Very short, But very powerfull. You used really good words in this piece. You really know how to write and make it interesting and keep the reader reading. And I really loved the last stanza. A really great ending to it. Keep up the awesome work! 5/5

    `taleee xx

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