Very short, But very powerfull. You used really good words in this piece. You really know how to write and make it interesting and keep the reader reading. And I really loved the last stanza. A really great ending to it. Keep up the awesome work! 5/5

`taleee xx

Bloody Hell! This was brilliant. It should be in a book. So true, so metaphorical, descriptive, symbolic with beautifully vivid images

Great Work

All the Best
Sondos

This one was great too. you have really good poems they are so beautiful.

Much love,

Marlena

Once again, your words roll so smoothy of thy lips. I love it. I can honestly relate. My relationship echos so much of what you speak. Gosh. 5/5

Quite an exquisite piece if I may say, welcome to my favorite`s list . Timothy r