First Step

by Chelsey   May 18, 2006


These feelings inside of me screaming out loud,
know one can hear them over the crowd.
I'm trying my hardest to hold on
but whats left of me is all gone.
I close my eyes and take a deep breathe
Then i go and take the first step
of my life without you.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    I REALLY like this poem...it created a great picture. And I loved your quote about being a born leader, REALLY cool perspective on that well known phrase.
    ~Jules

  • 18 years ago

    by Erica Jovie©

    I know just how u feel! i'm in love-( it took me an entire year to admidt that to myself) with my best friend named ransom! but he has a girlfriend so i have to pretend i'm okay with just being friends! you said that well and i love how u write what is on your heart! hey if you can will you please read my poem(s) down on my knees and/or miracles smile. AND PLZ COMMENT! i think you can relate!! thanx and God bless!

  • 18 years ago

    by chixanoodle

    You are a good poet u should be published

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