Look deep.

by Kat   May 18, 2006


Look deep into my eyes
I dare you too and you shall see what I see
The pain and blooded tears I shed
Feel the pain, as my flesh is ripped apart
All thanks to this blade

Put your hand against my chest
Feel my heart slowly rip apart
And hear the blood gush out

See my veins in my wrists
Look how they bleed
So slowly, and red
All thanks to this blade

Look at my life has it fades away
My heart, eyes and veins becoming nothing
I take my final breaths and sigh
All thanks to this blade I leave this world

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  • 18 years ago

    by Colby

    Great poem, but watch yourself you can be strong.

  • 18 years ago

    by Catherine

    Ok, there were some problems with this poem. First of all, it was unbalanced. I suggest adding some words or something to make it more ba;anced. For example you can email me. Second of all, the last paragraph didn't rhyme, and because the rest of the paragraphs rhymed, the last one should to.

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