Comments : Midnight Chant

  • 18 years ago

    by snuggles

    Wow, that is touching, it mends my wounds, but maybe just a little too hard, YOW NOW ITS STINGING!! gotcha! im a good actor, eh? but as i was saying, maybe it will give a more dramatic effect if u mentioned a fat guy about to sit on a tube of toothpaste without a cap on. based on your writing, i think you would write very good hymnals. keep up the good work, wishbone!
    ~SNUG~ peace out

  • 18 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    And you had the nerve to comment such a smart remark on my poem....oh me, you need to sit up and regroup....