I really like the style that this poem follows and I think you did a fantastic job with it. :)

This is great Leah. Again, I can't find a single fault with it. I love who you've worked the rhyming scheme. And the choice of vacabulary has left me with great descriptive imagery. You've definately became one of my favourite writers. x

I thought that was good...
i really liked it...
Kathleen...

Wow, this poem too,is like a song for mariners or pirates or an Irishman.
Great rythmn and tone.Wish you could hear me sing this poem!!.Keep up the good work.

Nicley put Gurl! I love this one too! 5/5 fo sho! I love the way you speak the truth!

Interesting format. I liked your use of metaphors and use of language, it was very well done. The last stanza really blew me away, the last line in particular "lies the dream of Faith." Great poem.