Short and catchy. I liked it. Good job. It was easy to follow and that is one thing that's hard to find with many poems, they're hard to follow. But you did a good job keeping it catchy and short. 4/5 Keep up the work!

~BJ~

Wow. There's alot of big words in there that I don't know what they mean.

Very creative. eh?

I loved it, hun. I thought it was different. Though it was short, it had alot of power within it. Keep it up! 5/5

Haha yeah quite emo....but that is o.k. I write some pretty emo stuff myself. it is short and didn't seem to finish that great but still I liked it.

~~Retniapdoolb

I loved this one....short but you got your point across. 5/5

Its short and i like it...i really get what you mean by this....addiction is something else isnt it...good job all points...always Manda