Short but good.

nighttime
[I think that should only have one "t" .. I could be wrong though.]

Not much else I can say. Such a short peice and all. But I liked it. Keep it up! 5/5

Been there. maybe you should work on this one it could come out to be a nice poem instead of a 1 stanza beginning.

Oh how we all experience that....and by we all I mean whoever can relate to this poem...including myself! It's so true *sigh* But I loved it..short sweet and intense. lovely 5/5