Wow.. very dark.. very very dark.. lol.. i like it! :) keep it up!
jessy xox

Oh.shit.
I love you times infinity

Wow. Such a dark/sad/haunting poem.

Really well done though. You had my attention from start to finish. WOW!

You chose GREAT wording for this I thought. Not a thing I would change. 5/5

I enjoyed it, it was very dark. A lot of emotion can be felt in it. I like the way u kinda concealed everything which gave it a dark tone. For grammar purposes I would try using more periods to end your sentences, but thats just to make it look nicer, and also just in case the reader gets confused, he/she knows when a sentence is over, and it gives the poem a nice flowing rhythm. Other then that I really liked it=D Please keep up the good work!

~+Megan+~

I really like this one of yours. In a few parts I got lost but the end summed it all up. good job

Oh my this had my skin crawling! This so such a good poem, very dark indeed! :)

Wow so sad and yet so touching.. there isn't anything about this poem that I wouyld change.. srry but good job and keep up the work .. 5/5

I LOVE it. I love the way you write I really do. Like I said before I hope that one day I get as good as you are. 5/5