Thanks for Being There..

by Wasted Fake Smiles   May 19, 2006


I thought we were best friends, but now look at us,
I have no one to talk to, or to sit with on the bus.
You said no matter what happened, you'd always be there,
You said you loved me, but you really didn't care.

You said you'd never hurt me, and you'd tell me everything,
We even got the "friends forever" friendship rings.
But now it's too late, you went and crossed the line,
Don't care what you do with your ring, but I threw away mine.

Thanks for always being there, until I needed you most,
Now when you see me walking around, I'll only see your ghost.
I hope someday you miss me, when your alone and crying,
But I won't care, because you left me when I talked of dying.

You told the whole school, I was a cutter,
You kicked me when I was down, and put me to the gutter.
Thanks for being, a best friend to me,
I hope you realize, without me, your lonely.

~~~NOT A TRUE STORY WRITTEN FOR CONEST! COMMENT AND VOTE THOUGH~~~
~*Who Cares?*~

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Woww! i thought this was excellent.. you really showed your hurt and anger through your poem.. dont worry hun, keep your chin up! :) nice poem!

  • 18 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    I forgot to mention I think this is better suited to friendship rather than sad catergory :o)

  • 18 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    Not too bad again I think you lack depth with your poems they start great but theres not enough of a story told to captivate me or bring me any sense of over whelming emotion...they end to abruptly...if you want a hand with improving your form just let me know I would be happy to help and if not I hope you can work with my criticism.
    Eirisa

    PS: Thanks for your comment also :O)